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Another Explication for Love Without Trust

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In 2011, You posed a rhetorical question in which You want us to explore what love without trust is really like. In fact, Your poetry that You have composed via Ms. Emi is Your answer to the interrogation. Undoubtedly, this is smother love. Indeed, You have used a variety of sonic rhetoric in order to contribute to the overall effect of the poem by painting various pictures of this mistrustfulness. The following discourse will further explain how the repetitive language is an important contribution to the gist, or basic connotation of Your masterpiece.
First, You have been working with repetition of the title in lines eight and sixteen. You have also echoed the second and fourth stanzas as a whole, e.g. "Everyone needs space, you didn't give me enough (6 and 14)." In other words, not having enough alone time is just one example of love without trust. Extended family members blaming our parents for our shortcomings is another case in point of this smother love. An additional subexample involves our older relatives stereotyping us and/or members of our generation.
Besides the titular emphasis, You have been operating with multiple kinds of rhyme in each quatrain. Of course, You have been maneuvering perfect rhyme in the odd-numbered poetic paragraphs. This embodies yet is not restricted to the rhyming words key/me and wrong/along in the initial quartet (1-4). Likewise, You have inserted Your slant rhyme in Your even-numbered quartets in which You have downright repeated in Your metrical composition. Surely, illustrations of these two word pairs consist of love/enough and much/trust (5-8 and 13-16).
In addition, You have been employing alliteration and this specifically comprises of the consonance and assonance in Your work of art. In particular, this beginning rhyme is highlighted via was/with in the fourth line of poetry. Other explications of this consonance encompass but aren't confined to what and were in row 9. However, models of assonance involve but is not bound to "everyone" and "enough" in the sixth plus fourteenth line of verse. There is additionally in/is succession one as well as the repetitiveness of I'm/ it in units five and thirteen.
In summary, You have been using different forms of repetition to emphasize that love without trust is not healthy and can leave us feeling boxed in. Not only are we unable to reach our fullest potential when we are stifled. We are blocked from helping those who are suffering the most. On top of this, we are interrupted and distracted a lot by those who are older than we are and it is just too disrespectful for us to ask them to leave us alone. Finally, those who You have been allowing us to help have dreams and goals that are more likely to come to pass if we are trusted more to help them even though we must social distance in order to protect them as well as society in general from Covid 19....

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